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Knux Plans

June 20th, 2016, 8:00 am

Average Rating: 3.00
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Author's Comments:

Reply Ink_wolf, June 19th, 2016, 6:16 am

Dear anybody making anything ever. If there's writing of any kind, run it through spellcheck for Spelling and Grammar. At the least, get it proof read.

Here's a fun game for us all. Point out all the spelling and grammar mistakes you can find on each page. I will award you points for each one. I'm not sure what I'll do for a reward just yet, but I'm sure you can all figure something out.

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User's Comments:

Reply Ionic Defibrillator, June 20th, 2016, 9:13 am

Oh my, this is so beginner like it hurts.

Reply SnowTheHedgehog, June 20th, 2016, 9:27 am

Let's see... Panel 1, Knux:
"We" not capitalised. New paragraph cuts sentence in half. = 2
Panel 1, Tails:
"Why" not capitalised. = 3

Panel 2, Knux:
"So" not capitalised... I'm beginnig to see a theme here. New paragraph cuts sentence in half. = 5

Panel 3, Knux:
"And", "Master" and "Emerald" not capitalised. New paragraph cuts sentence in half. = 9

Panel 4, Knux:
"After" not capitalised. = 10

Dayum, a whole round 10! I could remark upon The 2 sentences in panels 3 and 4 technically being one and unable to form standalone stences as depicted here, but a.) it's POV, and b.) negligible.

Solid 3/5, good strip, 2/5.

Reply picosux224 (Guest), June 20th, 2016, 4:23 pm

heh Snow bate me to it. that being said you better wear something stronger then Knuckles fists. because your guy will be in a world of pain your world to be exact.

Reply Ink_wolf, June 20th, 2016, 9:49 pm

@Ionic Defibrillator: Like a deeply infected tooth, right?!

@SnowTheHedgehog: 10 errors for the page? It must be a good day!

@PicoSuxx224: Don't worry, that guy has Plot-Armor! (...that or good writing took the day off...)

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